The Confusion 156
The Confusion | |
author | Neal Stephenson |
pages | 813 |
publisher | William Morrow |
rating | 8 |
reviewer | Jose M. Weeks |
ISBN | 0060523867 |
summary | An exhausting and extraordinary read from the author of Snow Crash and Cryptonomicon. |
The Confusion is the second volume of Neal Stephenson's Baroque Cycle (preceded by last year's Quicksilver , to be concluded later this year with The System of the World). Quicksilver tells two stories: the political and scientific development of Europe at the beginning of the Enlightenment, through the person of Daniel Waterhouse, and the adventures of "Half-cocked" Jack Shaftoe, a vagabond tramping around France and Germany, as he rescues a young woman named Eliza and does his best to win her. As the story develops, Eliza leaves the life of adventure and enters the world of politics, acquiring for herself along the way the title of Countess in France and Duchess in England; Jack falls so deeply to adventure that he disappears completely from the final third of the novel. We leave him to a certain death, an oar-slave aboard a pirate ship, half-insane with syphilis.
As The Confusion begins, Jack, in the first of dozens of reversals of fortune, wakes cleansed of syphilis by a boiling fever, rowing for a much less brutal master than expected, and somehow a member of a cabal with (I suppose by definition) a Plan. Eliza finds herself relieved of a staggering fortune and held, for practical purposes, under house arrest.
This volume follows the largely-separate stories of these two characters over the course of fourteen years, interweaving them chapter-by-chapter, as they move toward some ultimate climax that, of course, we will not have reached by this volume's conclusion. Stephenson labels each of these, though they are non-contiguous, as a book of The Baroque Cycle. Jack's story is book four, "Bonanza"; Eliza's, "Juncto", is book five.
Lazy critics will certainly remark that The Confusion has an appropriate title. Those who read at least two-thirds of it may notice that Stephenson presents a definition of "con-fused" (solids melted and then allowed to run together and mix) that bears a certain resemblance to the structure of this novel. But I read the title more as a reference to a period of time, at the cusp of the Enlightenment, in which all of Europe seems taken aback (another term for which Stephenson provides the origin, which he positively revels in doing). The world is in the midst of a deep depression, and the great confusion then is, what exactly is money?
Indeed, one gets the impression that The Baroque Cycle could just as well have been titled "How Money Got To Be That Way." Late in this novel, when Stephenson compares foundries to heartbeats, it becomes very clear that what we've been witnessing throughout The Confusion is the path through the gushing arteries and trickling capillaries driven by that heart. I recall now that in Cryptonomicon Stephenson spent an uncomfortable amount of dialog on the financial inner-workings of corporations. At the time I dismissed it as the ramblings of a particularly pedantic character; now I'm beginning to wonder if, inside Stephenson's hacker/geek-novelist facade, there isn't an accountant just screaming to get out.
Yet I make it sound dry, and Stephenson is anything but: in The Diamond Age he made Turing machines seem exciting, in Cryptonomicon it was cryptography and computer programming and mathematics in general--and he did so without the cheating we've been forced to accept these days, especially in film. And here, in the ebb and flow of silver, Stevenson constructs revenge plays, alchemical conspiracies, and an engrossing picture of the Way Things Work. There is a slow and deep pleasure in learning, in understanding; his talent is to impart this with all the visceral immediacy of swordplay.
That is not to say that he is above actual swordplay. Or conspiracies of piracy and murder and torture. In the world of Jack Shaftoe we have adventure packed so thickly that Stephenson finds he can't quite fit it all in: We follow Jack through each daring escape, each execution of an intricate plot that doesn't quite go according to plan--then we cut to the next chapter, months or years later, in which Jack has somehow found himself again destitute and in great peril. We spend half the chapter trying to figure out exactly what he's gotten himself into, and how, and what precisely happened to all of his co-conspirators, and the other half (once they've coincidentally reunited) watching them plot once more.
The worst of these is about half-way through The Confusion: After Jack and his cabal leave us successful in carrying out a particular plan, we return to Jack to find he's been working in an animal hospital in Hindoostan, hung in mid-air so that all the blood-sucking patients, from mosquitoes to ticks to giant centipedes, can feed. As he is displacing native workers I can only assume this is an elaborate pun on the word "scab." (His jokes, when they misfire, are horrendous. Example: "Any sufficiently advanced technology is indistinguishable from a yo-yo.") We find his companions have been scattered by a pirate ship (filled exclusively with female pirates) and Jack has been waiting patiently three years for the narrative to return to him. This was the point I nearly put the book away.
I can accept the cyclic reversals of fortune; I can accept the method of storytelling that begins in the middle and fills in back-story as it moves forward; I can accept a very long middle volume of a trilogy, which by nature has no real beginning or end. Together though, these do exhaust my patience and at times my attention. The Confusion would be a much better novel written completely at 1000 pages than it is part-summarized at 800.
Now I fear I'm being too negative. The novel dips at the center, but it shines in every chapter concerning Eliza, and toward the end it even shines for Jack. Eliza's talent lies mainly in manipulation, and so much of her story involves cryptic political moves, hints being dropped, and relationships being exploited. As the novel begins she is still young, and her motivation is mainly revenge. She is a the Stephenson heroine: Sharply intelligent, beautiful in a fierce sort of way, sexually uninhibited, and though morally centered, vicious when wronged. (He understands his audience--geeks, male, young--and he has a pretty good idea of what they want.) As she grows older, she softens, or at the very least she becomes to some degree satisfied.
There is maturity here, for Stephenson's characters and for Stephenson himself. Moreso than anything he's so far written. He allows his characters the room, the experience, the years it takes to fundamentally grow. There is more to it than that, though: there is the classical resonance, Jack's journey with The Odyssey, the reluctant Esphahnian revenge play with Hamlet, the general Shakespearean method of History, melding the reality of Kings and Dukes with the artistic truth of fiction. Stephenson has in The Baroque Cycle given himself a canvas broad enough that he can truly develop.
About the ending: though Stephenson need not really bother to end this book, as it is incomplete until the third volume is published, he does make an effort. What it suggests about the further story is intriguing, but it suffers from the same deficiencies, as an ending, as plagues his other novels: It is tied together clumsily and it doesn't really make all that much sense. It is painfully abrupt. I think, though, that I have come to understand why Stephenson ends his books this way: his characters are so vivid, so capricious, that they drive his stories anywhere but the ending he had in mind. He closes a book not in completion so much as surrender.
Disregarding Snow Crash, which is of another class completely, this is the best book Stephenson has so far written. I score it an eight, but I do so on a scale broader than the nine Slashdot previously gave Quicksilver: The Confusion is the superior novel.
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I love Neal Stephenson (Score:2, Insightful)
Re:I love Neal Stephenson (Score:1, Insightful)
Black Adder and Shaftoe (Score:1)
With the exception (Score:2)
"I have a cunning plan" -- Jack (Score:2)
Re:I love Neal Stephenson (Score:5, Informative)
It's cool how with the Shaftoe family he shows successful geeks through history.
I think you mean the Waterhouse family. The Shaftoes aren't too geeky.
Reading this post was taxing in itself (Score:5, Funny)
Re:Reading this post was taxing in itself (Score:5, Funny)
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Re:Reading this post was taxing in itself (Score:2)
Re:Reading this post was taxing in itself (Score:5, Funny)
Re:Reading this post was taxing in itself (Score:3, Funny)
Don't read any farther unless you want spoilers
Can't you see that I'm serious!
Here it comes
Blah, blah, blah.
Re:Reading this post was taxing in itself (Score:1, Offtopic)
To understand the post, RTFM.
Re:Reading this post was taxing in itself (Score:4, Funny)
OK --
Book long. Plot confusing.
That dumbed down enough? :-)
Re:Reading this post was taxing in itself (Score:3, Funny)
Book Like Rock.
That'll do...
Re:Reading this post was taxing in itself (Score:2)
Book Like Stew.
Chris Mattern
Life Like Stew...
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Re:Reading this post was taxing in itself (Score:1)
Re:Reading this post was taxing in itself (Score:2)
I guess Slashdot editors would probably post any written review.
Wheel of Time (Score:5, Interesting)
The earlier books in the series were full of events, but that is a thing of the past: an inordinant amount of pages in the recent books are devoted finding a magic cereal bowl that stops global warming.
Re:Wheel of Time (Score:2, Funny)
The latest books are all about baths. Baths, baths, baths! Woo-hoo!
Re:Wheel of Time (Score:3, Informative)
I just finished the Confusion today and I had far less problems keeping track of the characters than I did in Quicksilver. As soon as I started forgetting who a given character was, there would be a subtle reminder. There wasn't even a 'dramatis personae' in the Confusion if that indicates anything. For me, the first book seemed to keep getting bogged down in names and
Re:Wheel of Time (Score:1)
The Never-Ending Story (Score:2)
There seemed to be some sort of countdown process earlier in the series. Earlier, he seemed to be killing off one or two of the Forsaken (= nazgul-copies) per book. There were about a dozen of them, and it looked like that once the forsaken were killed off, it would be time to battle the Dark Lord Saur.. er Shaitan.
However, a couple of books ago, he started to add in new Forsaken to replace the ones who have
Re:Wheel of Time (Score:2)
Enoch Root (Score:5, Informative)
What's up with Enoch Root [cafeaulait.org]
Neal Stephenson Wiki [metaweb.com]
Re:Enoch Root (Score:2, Funny)
Re:Enoch Root (Score:3, Interesting)
Re:Enoch Root (Score:5, Informative)
This is based on a real person [metaweb.com]. He states that it is one of those "too wierd to make up" type things.
Re: duc d'Arcachon's diet (Score:1)
Re:Enoch Root (Score:2)
Heh, yeah, those who enjoyed The Baroque Cycle might also enjoy the Pendulum.
Re:Enoch Root (Score:2)
Your problem with Enoch Root's lifespan is tied up with the fact that that Rowling's book Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone [amazon.co.uk] was published in the United States as 'Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone'. 'Sorcerer's Stone' is, of course, meaningless, but in the world of Quicksilver [alchemylab.com], the Philosopher's Stone [sciencedaily.com] has particular meaning, and particular properties.
It's often a good thing to know some history.
[No, of course I'm not saying that Harry Potter is literature of the same class as Quicksilver [nealstephenson.com]]
Less Newton, more Leibniz (Score:5, Interesting)
Re:Less Newton, more Leibniz (Score:2)
Taken Aback (Score:5, Informative)
Origin : When the wind changes direction the sails of a sailing ship sometimes blow back against the mast, i.e. they are taken aback.
Re:Taken Aback (Score:2)
Interestingly, that isn't the "origin" posited by Stephenson: however (and Quicksilver and The Confusion are both rife with these little fictional-etymological anecdotes) I don't think Stephenson intended them as literal word origins, but entertaining fictionalized imaginings about the nature of terms and words.
The Confusion is a better read, if you can... (Score:5, Informative)
My fear is that, if this is Empire, we end up getting Ewoks in Book 3.
Re:The Confusion is a better read, if you can... (Score:1)
Re:The Confusion is a better read, if you can... (Score:2)
>My fear is that, if this is Empire, we end up getting Ewoks in Book 3.
Ewoks I can take. Gungans, and I get out the firearms.Re:The Confusion is a better read, if you can... (Score:2)
Boiled clean of syphilis (Score:4, Funny)
Re:Boiled clean of syphilis (Score:2)
Turning down to medium and letting simmer ... (Score:2)
You have to boil them if you want them clean enough.
Re:Turning down to medium and letting simmer ... (Score:2)
Operations manuals says, "Heat on high until boiling, then decrease heat to medium and let simmer for 45 minutes, or until tender. Serve with fried support staff, garnish with sprig of marketing dept."
I always forget the garnish...
Re:Boiled clean of syphilis (Score:1)
Re:Boiled clean of syphilis (Score:4, Informative)
I have not read The Confusion, so I can't comment on the context of boiled clean of syphilis. But I seem to recall that along with mercury, one of the treatments for syphilis was to infect the person who had syhpilis with a non-human targeted malaria parasite (something like horse malaria). The body would eventually wipe out the malaria infection since it could not properly reproduce in human red blood cells. The malaria infection would cause high fever (104 F.) which would harm (kill?) the syphilis bacillus. Of course racking fever was no picnic. But neither was heavy metal poisoning caused by mercury (mercury just got rid of the symptoms, not the syphilis infection).
I also have a vague recollection that the malaria treatment may have continued after antibiotics were discovered as a treatment for third stage syphilis (which infects the brain). The early antibiotics did not cross the blood/brain barrier and I'm not sure they could be injected into the spine. (Obviously I'm not a medical doctor, nor do I play one on television).
The problem with boiling is that it would raise the temperature on the outside more than the inside unless it were done very slowly. But the malaria "treatment" was not known until the 1800s, after the time in which the book is set.
Something about endings... (Score:3, Insightful)
Knowing Neil Stephenson, I don't expect anything different by the end of the third volume.
Re:Something about endings... (Score:2, Funny)
Oh wait, I thought you said you knew NEAL Stephenson. You're probably talking about the lawnmower salesman at Home Depot or something.
New Moderation (Score:3, Interesting)
-1 Spoiler mod?
Re:New Moderation (Score:3, Insightful)
Re:New Moderation (Score:4, Funny)
For Quicksilver? (Score:2)
Re:For Quicksilver? (Score:2)
The Review (Score:2)
Re:The Review (Score:2)
Tell me what you thought of the book once you finish the last page
Re:The Review (Score:2)
I have read both books now with my laptop sitting nect to me, so I can research some concept he has mentioned in passing, or to fact check something he mentiones in detail for truth.
The conclusion I have come to, he gets t
Re:The Review (Score:1)
OK, I looked at Amazon.com's ... (Score:1)
I'm sorry, but I didn't get that from the review. What's the opinion again?
It would be great for a geeks - thumbs up or thumbs down - in the beginning. Yes?
I have to read extremely long and boring papers all day. It would be nice to see in the first sentence of a review - it sucks for geeks! or It's great for geeks!
Sorry, I'm in a crunch, and I don't have patience for long ... writings.
Re:OK, I looked at Amazon.com's ... (Score:4, Funny)
Then this book probably isnt for you...
This reviewer should first learn to (Score:2, Insightful)
Is it possible.. (Score:1)
I'm sure the book is fabulous, but is there any way to summarize the plot of a sci-fi novel without making it sound like a 6 year olds daydream?
"Ok so theres this guy and he can fly an go through space but then these bugs go in his ears and eat his brain! The make him quit his job and become a tabledancer on a space ship to pluto! And then this giant talking half-bear thing comes and wants to beat him up but he has a ray gun so thats the end of tha
Re:Is it possible.. (Score:2)
That sounds familiar - (Score:2)
Re:Is it possible.. (Score:1)
Re:Is it possible.. (Score:2)
In many cases an author being labled sci-fi is nothing more than marketing to his past audience. T
Re:Is it possible.. (Score:2)
At my store, Stephenson--including the Baroque Cycle--is shelved in Science Fiction for one reason: because that's where people expect to find him. I agree that these would be better off in the straight Fiction section, but that's how the book business works. Once an
Re:Is it possible.. (Score:2)
Well, i thought we were discussing about The Confusion, which is _not_ scifi.
So it's more of the same? (Score:2)
From the start of this review, it looks like nothing's changed. You'd think he was getting paid by the word!
If his new stuff turns YOUR crank, that's great, but
Re:So it's more of the same? (Score:2)
In actual fact, Stephenson grew up as a writer since his "prior success". This latter books are targeted at a different audience, one who expects things more complex and refined than cyberpunk.
Good troll (Score:2)
Bah. (Score:1)
Personally I loved Cryptonomicon, but Quicksilver dragged so much that I doubt I'll bother to continue reading the series.
Re:Bah. (Score:1)
One might also keep in mind that Neil Stephenson has never written a satisfactory ending. He really seems to have a good time writing novels, but seems to put little thought into driving things to a logical conclusion. It is therefore unlikely that this new s
Re:Bah. (Score:1)
Now, if "System" doesn't have at least one, preferably two, possibly up to three points... I'm gonna be blunt....
What is money? - two takes (Score:4, Interesting)
His novels are more entertaining than essays. (Score:2)
Lazy (Score:4, Insightful)
And critics who want to say the same thing but are too pompous to do so will criticize the `lazy' critics.
-Colin [colingregorypalmer.net]
And elitest slashdotters will criticize in turn. (Score:2)
He doesn't really think it's confusing (more at con-fused, see review).
It's his REVIEW that's definitely confusing, and it needs revision.
But you managed to make a witty observation/play on words. How cute. Here's a cookie.
Cryptonomicrash (Score:1, Funny)
Snow Crash (Score:2)
So if the reviewer is a fan of "Snow Crash" and enjoyed this novel too, then maybe I'll give it a pass. And first I have to finish William Golding's "Pincher Martin"
Re:Snow Crash (Score:2)
I think people read for different reasons. I know that people that enjoy science fiction don't read for the same reasons that "lit geeks" do. If you are reading Golding, you're probably a lit geek. My girlfriend is one as well and she can't und
Re:Snow Crash (Score:2)
I too like the whole "carried away" feeling one gets from reading, but neat ideas by themselves aren't enough. In other words, that feeling comes from well-wri
Provocative style (Score:1)
I liked Snow Crash too, like many other people, and I'm not a native English reader/speaker/writer. With his down to earth style of writing, Stephen is able to skip right onwards to the more interesting bits of a story where heroic characters are in all sorts of precarious situations and problems. On the other hand, he is able to fill loads of sections with total and utter rambles that you wonder if you should really read on. But you usually do read on. And it usually is worth it, too.
I remember SnowCr
Re:Snow Crash (Score:3, Interesting)
Re:Snow Crash (Score:2)
The analogy with "Slaughterhouse Five" is a good one. Thanks again.
Eswhatian? (Score:2)
Erm. Anyone care to tell me what "Esphahnian" means? Google won't.
A proper noun (Score:2)
Re:Eswhatian? (Score:2, Informative)
An end? (Score:2)
I have seen the endings of his books as much more ambiguous. There is apparently no "happily ever after" or "the butler did it" in Stephenson's story's. Instead I always get the feeling he is trying to say that this part of the story is over and now life goes on.
i know it is entertainment, and everyone expects a beginning, middle and end. But, until you die, is your life like that?
Currently reading Quicksilver... (Score:3, Interesting)
Anyhow - since reading Cryptonomicon, and now Quicksilver - and what I am hearing about Confusion - I steadfastly believe that Neal is trying to tell us (geeks? maybe) something, that he is trying to impart on us some form of wisdom that most men have lost.
Now, I know that is a grand bit of hubris to suppose this - who knows what Neal is really thinking or trying to do, and to surmise that this is what he is doing seems to be rather arrogant (and I am someone thinking this!)...
I think he is showing us not only what and how "money" came into being - but how it can be done again - but this time in a fashion that is free from government meddling (ie, taxes, tariffs, fees, etc), among other ills which affects current monetary systems. He started delving into this with Cryptonomicon - but it dealt more with the "bank", less with money - how to store your "money", in other words, so that governments have no say about it. The Baroque Cycle is showing how to "make" money - that is, create a currency of exchange, because that is all that money is - a substitution for barter, because it is hard to carry around pigs and chickens for trade with you everwhere. It is showing it in a quasi-historical account. We, as geeks, should be following up the leads, where they are "true", and finding out the historical truth behind them - to learn how money works, where it came from, and most importantly, how governments function with (and without) it. I think that is the direction Neal is attempting to lead us, if only we would look and follow.
We need to wake up - fully - and recognize that we live in a corrupt world society, and that we have the power to change it, because we control the means of communication of this planet. We can either sit back, and wait for the chains of enslavement to be shackled upon us (if we don't get killed or worse by our fellow "civilized" men), or stand up and make the difference to free the world from this corruption.
Re:Currently reading Quicksilver... (Score:2)
My Thoughts on Baroque (Score:3, Insightful)
Since the major theme of Crypto was the development of a secure form of electronic currency, and the machinations that went into it, I expect to have some more great ties to the idea of credit and soft currency and trade drawn in System.
Is is only me or did some of the themes in the book, a la the Royal Society's rise and fall based on political support, patronage, etc., ring alarm bells to those of us in the F/OSS community? Is there a parallel to the beginnings of modern science and commerse to be found in the study of the Scientific Revolution? If so, technology is going to get cool in 50 years.
Cryptonomicon References (Spoilers!?) (Score:2, Interesting)
I love queen Kottakkal. (Score:2)
Oh my fucking god: longer? (Score:3, Funny)
Wait, you want it longer? Please, Jesus, don't encourage him to write even longer.
-c
there is no "dip at the center" (Score:2)
Well, it dips only if you don't enjoy "things baroque" only for the sake of themselves. I have to confess i'm a sucker for this kind of super-intricate plot that sprouts gratuitous detail at every step and branches off endlessly in subplots.
The Baroque Cycle has a great second book in The Confusion. Highly recommended.
Baroque Cycle/Crypto* as Economic History Textbook (Score:2, Interesting)
Cryptonomicon covers in excruciating detail, but with a story interested enough to keep you reading, the principles behind cryptography, which would be needed for a cryptographically sound currency, but it also covers modern ideas of value in corporations
Somebody help me out here. . . (Score:3, Interesting)
Snowcrash was unbelievably immature and completely implausible on an endless number of counts. The Ultra-Cool central idea, (a programming virus for Humans transmissible simply by looking), was half-baked and under-developed. What a shame. The only thing which kept that book floating was Neal's fun and punchy style of prose. (Sounds like the charismatic wise-ass in the class who knows more raw facts than the teacher, knows how to deliver them, but who still flounders like a dying fish when asked about the Meaning of Life.) Still, when read with the understanding that the whole book was (meant?) to be a pulp joke on the same level as, Kill Bill, I found it to be almost entertaining. Until the ending. Neal needs a good smacking for that ending. And his editors need to be fired.
Whatever.
More interesting was his internet-distributed essay he wrote after discovering Linux and ditching his Mac. Though the ending was also ill-focused and confusing. Pattern?
So the long and short is this. .
NO WAY am I going to torture myself with 1200 pages of his latest series just to know what the buzz is. And since the review doesn't cover what I want to know, I'll ask it here. .
Does Stephenson's expose of economic 'reality' take into account forces like the Masons, Knights-Templar, Rothschildes, the Jews and all that good stuff, or is it just another attempt to fill people with a self-satisfied belief that they know more than they really do?
Is Neal Serving or Harming?
Thank you.
-FL
Re:Somebody help me out here. . . (Score:2)
Yes. And Quakers. And non-conformists. And alchmists. And Dutch nationalists. And MIT. And much, much more.
This is rich, deep and seriously hard work to read. It's a book for when you have a lot of time to read and aren't going to be distracted. I'm about halfway through Quicksilver and struggling a bit because it isn't an easy book to read in ten minu
Re:SASKATCHEWAN RULES!!! (Score:2, Funny)
Find a cliff, jump off - please (Score:1, Offtopic)
next time you see the person you love most, imagine that happening to them, and see how funny you think it is. if you truly pass this video off as being in any way funny, please take a look inside yourself and realize what you've become
there's trolling (posting links to goat.cx and what not) and then there's being a disgusting human being
Re:Find a cliff, jump off - please (Score:2)
I knew it wasn't going to do any good, but I just had to vent
Re:Ouch! My neck hurts! (Score:2)